Story-The+Haunted+House+by+Yolanda

 **The Haunted House **  ‘Oh no I forgot again, it’s my best friend, Lisa’s birthday and we’re going to the haunted house near Skull Mountains for her birthday party and we’re going to be late! I don’t want to disappoint Lisa again not after last years complete birthday disaster.’ ‘Time to go Lucy!’ called mum. ‘One more minute mum, I just NEED to find my lucky socks. Oh where could they be?’ ‘LUCY NOW!!!’ I had to go, so off we went. When we arrived, I knocked on the door and an old, bony man came and welcomed us in. After I got in I suddenly got the creeps and the creeps were never a good sign. I started walking towards the party room and suddenly I heard a noise behind me. I turned around and looked and saw a… ghost!!!!! <span style="background-color: transparent; color: #000000; display: block; font-family: serif; font-size: 16px; text-align: center; text-decoration: none; vertical-align: baseline;">After that frightening experience I was nearly half dead and fainted in a loud THUD! <span style="background-color: transparent; color: #000000; display: block; font-family: serif; font-size: 16px; text-align: center; text-decoration: none; vertical-align: baseline;"><span style="background-color: transparent; color: #000000; display: block; font-family: serif; font-size: 16px; text-align: center; text-decoration: none; vertical-align: baseline;">When I woke up, it was all a bit blurry at first, but then I could see it as clear as day! <span style="background-color: transparent; color: #000000; display: block; font-family: serif; font-size: 16px; text-align: center; text-decoration: none; vertical-align: baseline;"><span style="background-color: transparent; color: #000000; display: block; font-family: serif; font-size: 16px; text-align: center; text-decoration: none; vertical-align: baseline;">There was no doubt about it; I could even see his fangs. The old man was a… VAMPIRE!!!!!! <span style="background-color: transparent; color: #000000; display: block; font-family: serif; font-size: 16px; text-align: center; text-decoration: none; vertical-align: baseline;"><span style="background-color: transparent; color: #000000; display: block; font-family: serif; font-size: 16px; text-align: center; text-decoration: none; vertical-align: baseline;">Getting ready to suck blood out of my beautiful neck! <span style="background-color: transparent; color: #000000; display: block; font-family: serif; font-size: 16px; text-align: center; text-decoration: none; vertical-align: baseline;"><span style="background-color: transparent; color: #000000; display: block; font-family: serif; font-size: 16px; text-align: center; text-decoration: none; vertical-align: baseline;">Then suddenly I realised, I couldn’t move at all. I was tied to a chair! The ropes were tight and there was no escape… unless I had some oil or even better LIPGLOSS!!! <span style="background-color: transparent; color: #000000; display: block; font-family: serif; font-size: 16px; text-align: center; text-decoration: none; vertical-align: baseline;"><span style="background-color: transparent; color: #000000; display: block; font-family: serif; font-size: 16px; text-align: center; text-decoration: none; vertical-align: baseline;">I managed to wriggle my hands into my pockets and take my bottle of lip-gloss and pour it on the ropes. I squeezed my hands through and they were free, I untied all the other ropes and I was free! <span style="background-color: transparent; color: #000000; font-family: serif; font-size: 16px; text-decoration: none; vertical-align: baseline;">I scampered to my trembling feet and started running down the corridor towards the front door. <span style="background-color: transparent; color: #000000; display: block; font-family: serif; font-size: 16px; text-align: center; text-decoration: none; vertical-align: baseline;"><span style="background-color: transparent; color: #000000; display: block; font-family: serif; font-size: 16px; text-align: center; text-decoration: none; vertical-align: baseline;">Then suddenly I heard a roar behind me, I turned around and there he was the vampire with fierce fangs and sharp claws. I made a run for the closest door and slammed it shut. <span style="background-color: transparent; color: #000000; display: block; font-family: serif; font-size: 16px; text-align: center; text-decoration: none; vertical-align: baseline;"><span style="background-color: transparent; color: #000000; display: block; font-family: serif; font-size: 16px; text-align: center; text-decoration: none; vertical-align: baseline;">I turned around to look for an escape route and there was Lisa also tied to a chair but she seemed to be asleep. Oh Lisa, couldn’t she find another time to sleep. <span style="background-color: transparent; color: #000000; display: block; font-family: serif; font-size: 16px; text-align: center; text-decoration: none; vertical-align: baseline;"><span style="background-color: transparent; color: #000000; display: block; font-family: serif; font-size: 16px; text-align: center; text-decoration: none; vertical-align: baseline;">LISA WAKE UP!!! <span style="background-color: transparent; color: #000000; display: block; font-family: serif; font-size: 16px; text-align: center; text-decoration: none; vertical-align: baseline;"><span style="background-color: transparent; color: #000000; display: block; font-family: serif; font-size: 16px; text-align: center; text-decoration: none; vertical-align: baseline;">She slowly fluttered her eyes open. <span style="background-color: transparent; color: #000000; display: block; font-family: serif; font-size: 16px; text-align: center; text-decoration: none; vertical-align: baseline;"><span style="background-color: transparent; color: #000000; display: block; font-family: serif; font-size: 16px; text-align: center; text-decoration: none; vertical-align: baseline;">‘What’s happening?’ she asked. <span style="background-color: transparent; color: #000000; display: block; font-family: serif; font-size: 16px; text-align: center; text-decoration: none; vertical-align: baseline;"><span style="background-color: transparent; color: #000000; display: block; font-family: serif; font-size: 16px; text-align: center; text-decoration: none; vertical-align: baseline;">So I told her everything. <span style="background-color: transparent; color: #000000; display: block; font-family: serif; font-size: 16px; text-align: center; text-decoration: none; vertical-align: baseline;"><span style="background-color: transparent; color: #000000; display: block; font-family: serif; font-size: 16px; text-align: center; text-decoration: none; vertical-align: baseline;">Then I untied her ropes and we ran out to the corridor, then we bolted towards the door. But it was LOCKED! We were absolutely devastated. <span style="background-color: transparent; color: #000000; display: block; font-family: serif; font-size: 16px; text-align: center; text-decoration: none; vertical-align: baseline;"><span style="background-color: transparent; color: #000000; display: block; font-family: serif; font-size: 16px; text-align: center; text-decoration: none; vertical-align: baseline;">Suddenly the vicious vampire was behind us! <span style="background-color: transparent; color: #000000; display: block; font-family: serif; font-size: 16px; text-align: center; text-decoration: none; vertical-align: baseline;"><span style="background-color: transparent; color: #000000; display: block; font-family: serif; font-size: 16px; text-align: center; text-decoration: none; vertical-align: baseline;">Under pressure, I kicked the door and it cracked opened! <span style="background-color: transparent; color: #000000; display: block; font-family: serif; font-size: 16px; text-align: center; text-decoration: none; vertical-align: baseline;"><span style="background-color: transparent; color: #000000; display: block; font-family: serif; font-size: 16px; text-align: center; text-decoration: none; vertical-align: baseline;">Without any doubt at all we ran out the door. I knew those karate lessons would pay off. <span style="background-color: transparent; color: #000000; display: block; font-family: serif; font-size: 16px; text-align: center; text-decoration: none; vertical-align: baseline;"><span style="background-color: transparent; color: #000000; display: block; font-family: serif; font-size: 16px; text-align: center; text-decoration: none; vertical-align: baseline;">I sprinted home and told my mum, but all my mum had to say was <span style="background-color: transparent; color: #000000; display: block; font-family: serif; font-size: 16px; text-align: center; text-decoration: none; vertical-align: baseline;"><span style="background-color: transparent; color: #000000; display: block; font-family: serif; font-size: 16px; text-align: center; text-decoration: none; vertical-align: baseline;">‘Oh Lucy, what an imagination you have!’

Elise:OMG you are a really creative writer and this story is amazingly funny and awesome! You really did need those socks after all! <span style="background-color: transparent; color: #000000; display: block; font-family: serif; font-size: 16px; text-align: center; text-decoration: none; vertical-align: baseline;"> Katana: I am not sure if it is part of the story or not but on line four if you meant lucky you accidentally left out the k. But it is a great story.